♫ 002 | Backdated to Feb. 14th because I derped yesterday.

[stagefrightened]

Definitely not my best work, but I wrote a bit of a song today. Maybe this would be the chorus... I'm not sure.

I love the way you get me
But, correct me if I'm wrong
This is not a love song
No, not a love song
I love the things you do
It's how you do the things you love
The way you sing it
With me through it
I guess I always knew it
I love the way you get me
But, correct me if I'm wrong
This is not a love song
No, not a love song

Comments

[reportedly]

Very nice.

[stagefrightened]

Thanks. I think it's alright.

[reportedly]

More than alright. I really like it.

[fullnamebasis]

Not bad, not bad.

[stagefrightened]

Thanks, Stephen! Maybe you can help me work on it?

[fullnamebasis]

Yeah, no problem.

[stagefrightened]

Thank you!

[fullnamebasis]

It sounds perfect for a chorus. You can even split up the end into a bridge to lead into a final chorus.

[stagefrightened]

Oh, that's perfect!

[fullnamebasis]

What're you thinking? Upbeat or more of a ballad?

[i_bullieve_i_can_fly]

oH, wOW,
uH, tHAT WAS REALLY GOOD, aND, i REALLY LIKED IT,

bUT FOR A LOVE SONG, iT SOUNDS LIKE A LOVE SONG, kIND OF,
uH, nO OFFENSE, i DON'T KNOW MUCH ABOUT MUSIC,
bUT LOVE IS A THING, yOU MENTIONED A LOT IN IT, sO,
iT'S FULL OF LOVE,

[stagefrightened]

Thank you, Tavros!

I guess it does talk about love a lot, but... Well, it wasn't supposed to be a love song. Maybe I'll make it one if I get more inspiration.

[i_bullieve_i_can_fly]

yOU'RE WELCOME,

uH, i HOPE YOU MANAGE TO GET SOME INSPIRATION, tHEN,
aND i HOPE YOU'LL SHOW EVERYONE, uH, oR AT LEAST ME, wHEN IT'S FINISHED, bECAUSE i WOULD REALLY LIKE TO HEAR IT WHEN IT IS,

[stagefrightened]

Thanks.

And I'll definitely show it to you, if you want, but I'll have to find someone to sing it for you if you want to hear it.